Sunday, December 6, 2009

Diary Entry Day 7

It is a really good part of the book getting into how he is going to survive, He's getting some wood for an spear and after he gets that he finds a part were the fish like to stay and now he nows how to get them aim just below them, I think next because he has a fire he is going to try and stock up on the wood.

Saturday, December 5, 2009

Dairy Entry Day 6

I think the book has a really good structure it flows really well, It is quiet a tense part of the book because he thinks that the rescuers will be there really quick, after the tornado I think that sort of suck but I think what will happen next because he can see the plane and there will be food in there or other stuff so he will try get into there.

Thursday, December 3, 2009

Diary Entry Day Five

He had found some berries and had had some food to eat it is a good part of the book really descriptive and i flows through well, I think that he will get his shelter done and he might find something that he can cook so he can have cooked food

Diary Entry Day Four

He's really thinking about what he needs now like shelter this part of the book isnt the best but it puts you in the sittuation and that is really good.

Wednesday, December 2, 2009

Diary Entry Day 3

it was a really good part of the book I would've done a few things differently, I dont think he will get hurt that much and he might be a bit stiff though.

Diary Entry Day 2

It was quiet a frustrating chapter it was annoying all the things that you would do differently, like find a radio for starters look for something that might help you drive it, I think no one will answer and things might start to happen.

Diary Entry Day 1

It was quiet an emotional chapter with the pilot having a heart attack I cant wait till the next part of the book I think he will probably get lost out there and probably run out of fuel